Sunday, April 29, 2012

Near-ly Revised


Can't recall if I've mentioned that I am trying to write about ten particular words that are often used both as a noun and verb. At any rate, the first one was called Near and I really hated it, so have been revising: 

Near


The rule is we all move to the new
suburb that everyone else is in

built entirely out of boxes
filled with the selves of our old photos

where the pictures are still chemicals
and labeled, everyone handles them

you can never be too sure these days
now that you too have oohed and ahhed and

given way without knowing what was
closer than your veins and skin almost

elegant the way it gets inside
like a virus.

2 comments:

  1. Very cool, suburbs scare me in their liminality, I get a sense of purgatory.

    An interesting series to take on.

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    1. Thanks, Mark. Liminality is precisely the word. Especially on a Friday when I'm supposed to be coming up with a poem and am stuck! It's going to be a caffeine-fueled evening in Suburbia tonight!

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